Monday, June 2, 2014

Favorite Passage


Loved this passage:

The problem being a wolf, even if you are socially retarded and incapable of picking up on physical cues like me, the pheromones of another wolf feel a little like a moldy mop smacking you across the face. Lisa really didn't need to say much.


WIP, Book 3


6 comments:

  1. Oh my yes, how a moldy mop would bite, against any face! Such vivid images, in so few words.

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  2. Such an evocative phrase. And I have a weakness for wolves too...

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  3. Interesting. Love the selective blue color in your book covers. Really nice!

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  4. Yep, pheremones are betrayers.

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  5. An interesting sentence, but it gives a negative impression of the female wolf. Is that what you're trying to do?

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